Coming Home

by Stacie on January 30, 2013

Who could that be at this hour?

Marion hardly ever got texts, even during the day, so hearing her phone beep at 10pm startled her.

She read the message.

I need to go potty.

Please let me out.

Marion’s eyes narrowed, her lips pursed. Was this some kind of joke?

I’m hungry.

And it’s cold, Mom. Please, I want to come home. 

Marion grabbed the terri cloth bathrobe off of the hook on the back of her closet door and slid it on as she headed downstairs. She retrieved the black business card from the bulletin board behind the kitchen desk and punched the number into the phone.

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“You have reached the Garden of Eden Cemetery. Our office is currently closed. Please call again during regular business hours. Thank you.”

Of course she knew they were closed. She had become well acquainted with the hours of operation over the last week.

I need you.

How could anyone be so inhumane? She started to shut her phone off.

Please, Mom. Please.

Someone was messing with her, a cruel trick. Still, the pleas shredded her empty heart. She had no choice.

Marion slipped on her sneakers and grabbed her car keys as she left the house, not caring that she was in her bathrobe.

The cemetery sat on top of a hill, a lovely view, only five minutes from her house but the drive felt so long, suspended animation.

When she at last arrived, Marion was struck by how lonely the place appeared, no one around, dark and eery. The moonlight barely illuminated the trees, spooky dancing shadows. Shuddering, she ran to the newly minted grave and started digging with her hands. The earth gave easily. After 30 minutes of digging, broken nails and fingers caked with earth, Marion pulled the tiny coffin from its resting spot.

With tears streaming down her face, she undid the latch and opened the lid.

Her faithful companion, Bella, sprang forward and covered her face in wet kisses.

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I’m linked up with the yeah write speakeasy. The fabulous place for fiction and poetry. This week, we had to use the photo prompt and start with the sentence “Who could that be at this hour?” Such fun! Why don’t you head on over there and check it out!

{ 30 comments… read them below or add one }

Suzanne January 30, 2013 at 6:08 pm

Oh wow Stacie, what a great take on the prompt and what a great story! Creepy and sweet all at the same time. I love it!

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Stacie January 30, 2013 at 10:51 pm

Thanks! It’s so nice to get such an awesome comment!

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Mel January 30, 2013 at 7:34 pm

This gave me goosebumps, made me tear up and then smile. Great job!

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Stacie January 30, 2013 at 10:51 pm

I like the happy endings but often in fiction I go dark.

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Bee January 30, 2013 at 7:35 pm

This had me hooked right away — was she kidnapped? What is a ghost? I love the ending!

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Stacie January 30, 2013 at 10:52 pm

Thanks! Usually I have no idea where I’m going.

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Mod Mom Beyond IndieDom January 30, 2013 at 10:16 pm

Wow! Stellar! Horrifying and heartbreaking.

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Stacie January 30, 2013 at 10:52 pm

But happy ending, kind of…

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Natalie the Singingfool January 30, 2013 at 11:45 pm

Whew, had my heartrate going there with that one! Great pacing!

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:08 pm

Thanks Natalie!

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IASoupMama January 30, 2013 at 11:47 pm

Pet Cemetary… Now I’m in a Stephen King fog… Good work, ma cherie!

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:09 pm

I love Stephen King. The King of creepy!

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Sandra Crook January 31, 2013 at 12:58 am

So sad; I really wasn’t expecting that ending. Well done!

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:09 pm

Thanks Sandra!

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Nadine January 31, 2013 at 1:14 am

You know it’s a good story when you have to read it twice!! Really grabs you from the start and the heart is racing by the end. Nice one.

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:09 pm

What a nice comment Nadine, thank you!

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Fran@BCDC January 31, 2013 at 9:41 am

Ooooo…creepy but really good, Stacie!!

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:10 pm

Thanks Fran!

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The Dose of Reality January 31, 2013 at 9:47 am

GAH! I was creeped out at first…then smiled! Great story!! :)

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:10 pm

Usually I end them creepy too, which is funny b/c I like happy endings.

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Kristin January 31, 2013 at 2:33 pm

This had Poe, The Walking Dead, and even a (perhaps unintentional?) reference to Twilight. Ha! Awesome!

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:11 pm

I admit to liking Poe and that I’m watching the Walking Dead. I’ve never seen Twilight though, so that’s definitely unintentional ;)

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Samantha Brinn Merel January 31, 2013 at 3:35 pm

Love it! I’ve always been a sucker for a creepy-scary story like this.

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:11 pm

Quite the contrast from your romance novels Samantha!

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Christie Tate January 31, 2013 at 3:44 pm

Whoa. I meant whoa. Floored.

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 5:11 pm

Aw, thanks Christie.

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Larks January 31, 2013 at 6:00 pm

Omg ZOMBIE DOG! That can psychically text! I love this! I’m so sharing.

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Stacie January 31, 2013 at 8:56 pm

I’ve been watching Walking Dead and wondering where the heck all the pets went. Where?

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Carinn @welcometothemotherhood January 31, 2013 at 9:58 pm

Stacie – I just love your fiction!!! This was captivating. Part of me wished you had gone all the way dark with the dead child thing, but part of me was relieved you didn’t! Awesome story.

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Jack January 31, 2013 at 11:48 pm

I like the spooky and edgy stuff- well done.

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